Minggu, 10 Juni 2012

365 jours avec vous


365 Days with You

            “We totally disagree with this motion ("This House Would Agree the Prisoner Take Care the Baby behind the Bars")".  It was spoken clearly by that girl. The final words were emphasized by her that she disagree with that motion and made the adjudicators convinced with her statement. That girl wore the glasses. She has brown and sharp eyes. She looked mysterious; her style made most of people didn't believe that she was a debater. But, when she delivered her argument, the people were surprising.
            That girl was Vina Sharzy, all people called her “Ina". The weather of National Debate Competition was so tight after Ina delivered her argument. It was final stage that Ina's role as the last speaker from all participants.
Suddenly...
            “Well, ladies and gentleman, the member of this house, all the participants from affirmative and negative team have delivered their argument. And, as the chairman of this National Debate competition let me announce who is the winner of National Debate competition 2009. And the winner is.... the winner is.... Ok, both of team has given us their best performance. But, we have to choose one of them. And, the winner is Negative team from SMAN 2 Jakarta."  The chairman said
            Ina and her friends were surprised when the chairman was announcing the winners. They looked each other. Ina felt that her blood moved to the brain and her heart skipped like a drum. She was speechless. Her team conquered the hardest team from a famous school in Indonesia that won National debate competition previous year.
            “Oh, thanks to God, finally!!!! We win this competition". Nisa said
            “I don't believe it!!! Thanks God". Eci added
            Ina just kept silent. Nisa and Eci was Ina's partner in debate, but, they weren't close in daily activities. Then....
“Well, the winner can go forward. Give applause, please! The chairman asked
            Ina and her team were given the trophy and money as the reward from the leader of National Debate competition execution. Then, they shook hand each other. But Ina looked so worry, her step was unpredictable. What was on her mind? Only she could answer it. A tall boy closed to Ina. Then, he gave his hand. And…
“Congratulation!” he smiled
“Yes, Thank you!” she replied
            That boy left Ina. But, her eyes couldn’t stop to looking at that boy. Ina counted every single step that boy took when he walked away. Ina has never done like that. She was well known as ignorant girl.
“Gee, what happened to me? She said on her mind
“Hey, let’s go home! My mother is waiting for us in the parking area!” Nisa said to Ina and hold her shoulder
            “Oke!  Ina replied
            They went to their own home. When Ina was in the Nisa’s car, without she realized, she smiled at herself and made both of her partner were confused as long as way.
At Ina’s house…
“How’s your debate?  Fara said when Ina was in front of their room
“Great! We won the competition! Far, I met with that boy again, you know?
“Waaaahh!!! Treat me! Are you serious? Fara enthusiastic
“Of course! As you know that we were against with their team!” Ina explained
“What’s his name?” Fara asked
“Rafa! Yes, Rafa is his name”
“Ohhh, where’s he from?
“He’s from SMAN 70 Jakarta!”
“Oh, I’m proud you my sister, you’ve conquered that school!” Fara hug Ina tightly
“Thank you, my beloved sister but you have to take your hands from my body because I
want to take a bath!” Ina said
“Upps, sorry I forget it.
            Ina opened her notebook to surfing in social network after she took a bath. She got frustrated when she was trying to find someone on the Facebook. She typed again and again but the result was nothing
“Arggggh!!! Why don’t I find him on the Facebook? She asked herself
            The words were typed by Ina was “RAFA”. She tried to find Rafa on the facebook, but she couldn’t. Finally, she searched through mutual friends in SMAN 70. Suddenly, there was Raffa Algani she found on karimah’s friend on the Facebook. She opened his profile, then….
“Finally!!! I found him! Ina shouted
            Directly, she sent a friend request to Raffa. She just waited for Raffa’s confirmation. And, Ina wrote on her facebook’s wall
“Finally, I found you J!!!”
Day 1
            “Raffa Algani accepted you as his friends. Write something on his wall”, she shocked while she was reading the notification on her facebook. Then, she wrote a message to Raffa
“Thank you for the acceptation. Nice be your friend J! Actually, your performance was good. Unfortunately, you haven’t had good intonation L
             She was waiting his reply. But it was too long. She decided to lay on her bed because it was on the midnight.
Day 2
            Ina’s school
            That morning was so bright, as soon as possible Ina went to school, she has high spirit that morning. At the rest time, she and Kiki, her close friend went to the library, their favorite place for rest time. They always read soccer magazine in the library because both of them, Ina and Kiki were Football Holic. Besides, they also have same passion and taste. Suddenly, there was a beep ring on Ina’s phone. It was Facebook Notification.
            “Raffa Algani sent you a message” she read the notification
            From                : Raffa Algani 
            To                    : Vina Shezry
            Subject                        : You’re welcome
            You’re welcome. Oh, you were from SMAN 2, weren’t you? I guess.  You wrote “you haven’t had good intonation” what’s you mean? Nice be your friend, too J
            Kiki looked at Ina, she smiled at herself. Then, she asked
“Are you crazy?”
“No, I am not! She smiled
“Why do you smile at yourself?” Kiki added
“Nothing!” Ina replied
            Ina still smiled at herself. She held the hand phone on her hand and typed a message to Raffa. She wrote:
Yeah, I’m from SMAN 2. Ehmm... it means your expression. Your argument was so good; we thought that we would lose. Supposing, your expression when you delivered the argument weren’t flat. I believe you would be a winner.
Your message just sent! She read the notification. She heard the bell rang and asked Kiki to leave the library and back to their class. It was tired day. She just arrived at her house at 8.00 p.m because she has 3 courses at Wednesday.
Ina lie on her bed and she took her handphone and she surfed again on Facebook. She made a status “Too tired, God L!”
“Raffa Algani like your status (y)” in her notification, and again, she laughed at herself. The tiredness felt nothing after she got new message from Raffa.  Raffa said…
Oh, I see. By the way, what is your nickname? So, we can be closer *wink* hehehee
Her feeling was uncertain; she didn’t know what she should write to reply Raffa’s message. It was the most beautiful night ever. If only the moon could talk with her, she would tell what she felt that night.
She replied….
You can call me Ina, now, I remember! You’re student of English First, aren’t you? I’ve saw you about 3 times, so I can recognize you. J
Ina took her handphone beside her. She got yawn and decided to close her eyes
“What a beautiful day is!” she said before turned off the lamp
Day 3

Oke, Ina! Yeah, I’m student of EF. Are you a student of EF, too? I think, you’re déjà vu. Hehehe….I have met you, too. I don’t know, how many times, exactly. LoL
She read Raffa’s message as loud as she could. What Ina have said with herself about Raffa was wrong. She took back his words that Raffa was such kind of arrogant boy. He was friendly. There was no one in her house because it was weekend. Her mother, father and sister went to shopping. But, Ina more chose to stay at home. She replied…
Hahaha… you’re so funny, Raf. So far, you’re nice person. Yeah, I’m student of EF, too
Day by day, they sent a message each other. Ina felt everyday was colorful since she knew Raffa. She has never had a relationship with any boy. Ina didn’t know how love could stroke someone. Again and again she felt different after she was closer to Raffa. She asked herself it was a love or instant desire?
They haven’t special topic when they sent a message to each other, they just exchanged about their experience, information about competition and also, they have never asked their phone number each other.
Day 23
English First Course
            She saw a man in front of her. It was about 10 meters from Ina. She knew and convinced that boy was raffa. Her heart skipped a beat and she got breathless. Ina wanted to call him. But, she was shy. Ina hoped that boy was Raffa.
“c’mon…c’mon turn your body back, please! Turn your body back, please! She said
Fortunately…
“Ina?” that boy said
“Raffa? That’s you?” She replied
“Yeah, as you see J ! Ohh, this is the first time we meet as real friend. We talk face to face oh my…” he claimed
“Oh my…? Yeah, I’m glad to meet you, Raf
“Unfortunately, I don’t have long time to talk with you; I’ve a promise with my parents for my preparation to France. He explained
“Never mind? You said France? You want to continue your study in France?” Ina asked
“Ehemm… ok Ina, I must go on, now.” He touched Ina’s shoulder
“Take care, Raff.” Ina shouted
Raffa waved his hands to Ina, she replied with big smile.
***

Day 45
            Ina wanted to face national final examination. She has never sent a message to Raffa about 19 days. And, Raffa was busy with all his preparation to study in France. Ina locked her facebook to focus on her examination. The conflict was happened in Ina’s class on Tuesday when Bella, one of Ina’s classmate told to Ina that Kiki wrote something on her wall about Raffa. Her tears fell down without she realized when Bella told what Kiki has done with Ina.
            “I have never expected that Kiki, my close friend will do this crazy thing like this”.  She said to Bella
“Yes, if I were you, I’ll totally embarrass! Bella explained
            That morning was so dark; she felt the thunder attacked her. It was teardrops in the rain! Kiki closed to Ina, she looked her friend cried.
“What happened, Ina? Kiki asked
“Ki, what did you do to me? What happened with your Facebook? Ina questioned
“I don’t know what’s your mean, Na!”
“Don’t be verbose! Bella has told me!” Ina got angry
“You’ve misunderstood with me; I do it because I really care with you, Ina! I just regret, why you don’t say to Raffa honestly that you like him. So, I wrote on my wall to inform him that you like him for your kindness.” Kiki answered
“Yes, I’m too shy to confess it! But, you don’t have to like that! You make me embarrass!”
“I’m so sorry. But, I believe he didn’t know. Because I removed it after I posted in 1 minute
“I don’t need your explanation anymore, away from me, please!” Ina asked
Kiki left Ina alone. Suddenly, fresh blood out from Ina’s nose, it was 4 times that happened with Ina for this month. She thought it was usual thing and never bothers it. Ina and Kiki was no longer being a friend. Actually, Kiki was the best place for Ina to tell everything that happened with her. Now, she has not had anymore.

***
Day 123
It was about 26 days for Raffa before he left Jakarta; Ina has passed the National Examination and took in University of Indonesia. She opened her Facebook again and made a good relationship again with Kiki. But, they weren’t closer before.
When Ina went online on Facebook…
Raffa   : hey Ina? How’s life?
Ina       : I’m fine and you? How’s your preparation, Raf?
Raffa   : so far, so good J, Ina it’s about 26 days before I go to France
Ina       : L  I can’t see you anymore, Raf! Are you still in EF?
Raffa   : no, I’m not. Hahaha… you can see my face every time if you want on Facebook
Ina       : LOL. Ok, Raffa I want to go Offline! Bon courage (keep spirit)…
Raffa   : Good bye!

Day 149
“Au revoir, see you 5 years later” it was status from Raffa on Facebook when he typed on the plane before it took off. Ina could smile. Actually, she hurt.
23 days before…
EF course
            That boy shook hand with his friends one by one. One of his friends looked very sad, it was his farewell. When he saw parking area, he directly ran…
            “Ina, it’s my last time to go here, thanks to god! You are here because I want to say goodbye with my friends.” He said
“Ohh... Raffa! yes… get the best for you study in France, good bye…
They shook hand each other, Raffa saw Ina’s tears fell down.
“Are you ok? Raffa said
“I’m fine, Raffa I am being waited for my mother, Bye...
It was their farewell; there were no special words to say by the chance. Ina went she said “Bye” with Raffa. He didn’t realize that Ina was so sad. Ina again locked her facebook after she saw the last status of Raffa on the Facebook.
Day 365
Raffa saw there were 2 messages on his Facebook…
Dear Raffa,
                    It’s my last message, Raffa… glad be your friend, through this message, Ina want to say that Ina like you, Raffa. Although, in our message there’s no special words. but, I think every single word that Raffa wrote were very special and important for Ina.
                    Ina is no longer live in this world, it’s hard to say but it’s the fact. As you know that Ina has fallen with Raffa before Ina know more about Raffa. 242 days are long time for Ina to let Raffa go... thank you, for all your messages. It’s all make Ina happy.Good bye
      The message was from Ina, and Raffa was shocked after he read the second messages…
                    From       : Kiki Augusta
                    To           : Raffa Algani
                    Subject   : Ina
First, I want to inform you that I’m Ina’s close friend. Raffa, I’m sorry to say that Ina has died. She has leukemia and it was last stadium, she left this world 2 days ago. As Ina’s close friend, I just want to tell you about Ina. She was cheerful and ignorant girl, since she knew that she has leukemia, her life became dark. Because of you, she got her passion back, I knew that there’s no special relationship between you and Ina. She has told me everything about you. Actually, Ina always pay attention with every your come to EF course. You’re the one that she likes very much. I lost contact with Ina since we took different University. But, 14 days before she died, her sister informed me that Ina was in hospital. I really surprised when I saw Ina in the hospital. It was terrible. I remembered the last words that Ina spoke “He changed my life, thank you.” And the last, I just want to say thank you, you’ve given my beloved friend spirit. So, she can survive for enough time
Raffa was speechless, he couldn’t cry. He could only say
“Rest in peace, Ina …

The end






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